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 Author kim sang heon Date 2008-01-05 21:04:08
 Title D-1= My family has a cold.
It is duing the holly day...
=> I am on holiday now...

But unlike other friends I don't like holly day.
=> But unlike my friends, I don't like holidays.

Becaues I have to stucked in my hose and sutudy all day.
=> Because I have a stuffy nose, I have to stay in and study all day.

Any way I got up early and had a shower but soon I've found out that my body
wasn't right.
=> Anyway, I got up early and had a shower. However, I soon found out that my body was not feeling right.

My head was aching and my stomache was feeling sick.

I've told that to mom and she said I might have cought a cold.
=> I told my mom, and she said I might have caught a cold.

I think I have got this cold from my sisther.
=> I think I got this cold from my sister.

Any way she gave me a hot tea.
=> Anyway, she gave me some hot tea.

It was not very tasty, actually it was very bitter but it was sort of medecine for cold so I'd just draked it all.
=> It was not very tasty, instead it was very bitter and it was sort of like cold medicine so I drank it all.

I felt my throat was getting a bit better but that tea was not the doctor so my cold didn't get a lot better
=> I felt my throat was getting a bit better because of the tea, but it did not get better.

Any way my mom I thought my cold wasn't too bad so I started to study.
=> Anyway, my mom didn't think my cold was too bad so I started to study.

When I was studying my mom and dad went out to look for a refrigerator.
=> When I was studying, my mom and dad went out to look for a new refrigerator.

Our refrigerator is nearly 15years old so it's nearly a garbage so we need a new one.
=> Our refrigerator is nearly 15 years old now, so it's like garbage. Thus, we need a new one.

But while my mother was out my head started to ache strongly and I con't do any more work so I just layed in my bed and had some rest.
=> But while my mother was out shopping, my head started to ache strongly and I couldn't do any more work so I just layed in my bed and rested.

It was the worst cold I've ever had.

When I had a cold last time it was not really serious.

It had gone better only by sleeping about an one hour.
=> It had gotten better by sleeping only about one hour.

I think my body have gone weeker because I have't done any execise for long time.
=> I think my body has gotten weaker because I haven't exercised for a long time.
* to have: present tense verb has: present continuous

When I was in second grad I wasing going to take-won-do gym so even i got the cold it didn't last too long.
=> When I was in second grade, I was going to take tae-kwon-do to help me with my physical health.

It is the second day since i've got a cold but I still feel dizzy and all parts of my body and aching badly.
=> It is the second day of my cold and I still feel dizzy, and all parts of my body are aching badly.

But the wort part is my sister and my cold have gone to my mom.
=> But the worst part is that my sister and my mom have caught my cold. So they are very sick now.

Her head it really hot and she feels really cold.
=> Her head is really hot and she feels really cold.

Her cold is much worse then me or my sister.
=> Her cold is much worse than my sisters and mine.

She is even hard to speak.
=> She can hardly speak now.

I hope she and my family could can get better as soon as we can so every one in our home can be heatly.
=> I hope my mom and my family get better soon so we can all be happy in our home again.

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