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 Author kim sang heon Date 2008-01-18 21:33:48
 Title My cousin
I went to my cousins house few days ago.
My sister and I were so excited of going there.
It is in somewere around pusan.
We've took a bus and a subway to go there.
When I came back from the camp Our thing were all packed and we were ready to go.
We arrived at there about 5 o'clock.
When we came out from a subway station we can feel the sound and smell of the ocean.
But there was a problem.
We don't konw the way to our cousin's house so we called our cousin to come out and take us to there home.
While going there I went to a bookstore and borrowed a comic book.
When I reached there I lied on the sofa and played a nintendo and read a comic book.
After an hour my cousin and I went out side to but something for dinner.
We bought a pork and vegetables for a dinner.
It was the part that I've never tasted before.
I was really nice but my sister thought it was a blob and didn't at it.
After that my cousin and I went to a public bath.
I was quit nice to put my stressed body into warm water and my body was bit dirty so I needed a bath.
As it is an saturday the bath was crowded with people and there was a lot of steam so it was hard to see the where was the front.
After having a bath for a 3hours we've came back.
Me and my cousins were very hungry we my aunt and my mom made a sweet potato for us.
We've wanted to stay up for nights but the neighbours were so angry of us for not sleeping and they called our cousin's home to bequiet so we had a no choice but to go to bed.
On the second day we went to a very famouse restaurent.
It was bit far from our cousin's house.
It was a place wich sells a neck of the pork.
I've thought it wasn't very nice but after I've tast it I could't say that again.
Only the smell of the meet was making my mouth watered.
While eating the food the snow was started to fall.
Though I saw a snow few times before but I'd never felt that snow was very beautiful.
After filling my stomache with deliciouse pork we went to down stair and had a soup.
The room was so warm and the foods were very great.
I still can't forget the taste of that food.
By the time we finished the tea it was time to get dark so we came back.
We watched some comedy progem on tv and went to bed.
On the next day Monday was just same as usual.
I woke up and listen to the english new and had a breakfast and then do some work and had a bit of break and read a book.
But it was much enjoyable then our home because I can play with my cousin when I have a break.
We've used to meed each other very often when we were your but getter older we were so busy so we didin't have time to meet each other ecept for few days.
On Tuesday we've watched a movie call National Treasure.
It was quite interesting moive.
It is about the book which has an all of the american's secret file can only be shown by a president of USA.
Any way it was the nice movie.
After a few days we had a sad news.
Our original plan was to stay in that house untill saturday or sunday but my mom changed a plan to go back to our house on wednesday because of the neighbours.
So we've came back to hour home about 6 o'clock.
I hope I can go to their house some day.

Edited by Susan ===================================>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

I went to my cousins house few days ago.
=> I went to my cousins house a few days ago.

My sister and I were so excited of going there.

=> My sister and I were so excited to go there.

It is in somewere around pusan.

=> It is somewhere near Pusan.

We've took a bus and a subway to go there.

=> We took a bus and a subway to get there.

When I came back from the camp Our thing were all packed and we were ready to go.

=> When I returned from the camp, our things were all packed and we were ready to go.

We arrived at there about 5 o'clock.

=> We arrived there about 5 o'clock.

When we came out from a subway station we can feel the sound and smell of the ocean.

=> When we came out from the subway station, we could feel the sound and smell of the ocean.

But there was a problem.

We don't konw the way to our cousin's house so we called our cousin to come out and take us to there home.

=> We didn't know the way to our cousin's house, so we called our cousin to come out and take us to their home.

While going there I went to a bookstore and borrowed a comic book.

=> On the way there, I stopped at a bookstore and borrowed a comic book.

When I reached there I lied on the sofa and played a nintendo and read a comic book.

=> When we arrived at their home, I lied on the sofa and played Ninetendo and read a comic book.

After an hour my cousin and I went out side to but something for dinner.

=> After an hour, my cousin and I went outside to buy something for dinner.

We bought a pork and vegetables for a dinner.

=> We bought pork and vegetables for dinner.

It was the part that I've never tasted before.

=> I never tasted that part of the pork before.

I was really nice but my sister thought it was a blob and didn't at it.

=> I thought it was really good, but my sister thought it was a blob and didn't eat it.

After that my cousin and I went to a public bath.

I was quit nice to put my stressed body into warm water and my body was bit dirty so I needed a bath.

=> It was quite nice to put my stressed body into warm water, and my body was a bit dirty so I needed a bath.

As it is an saturday the bath was crowded with people and there was a lot of steam so it was hard to see the where was the front.

=> It was Saturday so the bath was crowded with people and there was a lot of steam so it was hard to see where the front was.

After having a bath for a 3hours we've came back.

=> After bathing for 3 hours, we went back home.

Me and my cousins were very hungry we my aunt and my mom made a sweet potato for us.

=> My cousins and I were very hungry so my aunt and mother made a sweet potato for us.

We've wanted to stay up for nights but the neighbours were so angry of us for not sleeping and they called our cousin's home to bequiet so we had a no choice but to go to bed.

=> We wanted to stay up all night, but the neighbors were so angry at us for not sleeping that they called our cousin's home to tell us to be quiet. We had no choice but to go to bed.

On the second day we went to a very famouse restaurent.

=> On the second day we went to a very famous restaurant.

It was bit far from our cousin's house.

=> It was a bit far from our cousin's house.

It was a place wich sells a neck of the pork.

=> It was a place which sells the neck of the pig.

I've thought it wasn't very nice but after I've tast it I could't say that again.

=> I thought it wasn't very nice, but after I tasted it I enjoyed it.

Only the smell of the meet was making my mouth watered.

=> The smell of the meat made my mouth water.

While eating the food the snow was started to fall.

=> While eating the food, snow started to fall.

Though I saw a snow few times before but I'd never felt that snow was very beautiful.

=> Though I saw snow a few times before, I never felt that snow was very beautiful.

After filling my stomache with deliciouse pork we went to down stair and had a soup.

=> Afterwards, I filled my stomache with delicious pork and went downstairs and had soup.

The room was so warm and the foods were very great.

=> The room was so warm and the food was very great.

I still can't forget the taste of that food.

By the time we finished the tea it was time to get dark so we came back.

=> By the time we finished the tea, it got dark so we went back home.

We watched some comedy progem on tv and went to bed.

=> We watched some comedy program on tv and went to bed.

On the next day Monday was just same as usual.

=> The next day was Monday, and it was the same as usual.

I woke up and listen to the english new and had a breakfast and then do some work and had a bit of break and read a book.

=> I woke up and listened to the English news and had breakfast and then did some work. Then I had a short break and went back to reading the book.

But it was much enjoyable then our home because I can play with my cousin when I have a break.
=> It was very enjoyable at our home because I could play with my cousin when I had a break.

We've used to meed each other very often when we were your but getter older we were so busy so we didin't have time to meet each other ecept for few days.

=> We used to meet each other often when we were young, but now that we are older, we are so busy so we don't have time to meet each other that often.

On Tuesday we've watched a movie call National Treasure.

=> On Tuesday, we watched a movie called National Treasure.

It was quite interesting moive.

=> It was quite an interesting movie.

It is about the book which has an all of the american's secret file can only be shown by a president of USA.

=> It is about the book which has all of the American's secret files in it and can only be shown by the President of America.

Any way it was the nice movie.

=> Anyways, it was a nice movie.

After a few days we had a sad news.

=> After a few days we had some sad news.

Our original plan was to stay in that house untill saturday or sunday but my mom changed a plan to go back to our house on wednesday because of the neighbours.

=> Our original plan was to stay in that house until Saturday or Sunday, but my mom changed our plans to return back to our house on Wednesday because of the neighbors.

So we've came back to hour home about 6 o'clock.

=> So we returned back to our home around 6 o'clock.

I hope I can go to their house some day.
=> I hope I can go back to their house some day.