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 Author kim sang hun Date 2008-01-19 13:49:44
 Title The camp
I'd went to the camp few days ago.
The ulsan university took us to the camp.
It was in the moutain of gyeongju.
At 9 o'clock we've went to the ulsan university.
There were about 70students.
I've meet a friend who i've meet on computer class.
I'd said hello to him but he didn't recconized me so I'd just passed on.
About 12am we arrived at the camp.
It was on the moutain.
Because it was rainy it was very foggy and freezing cold.
While eating a lunch the rain changed in to a hail.
Af first we thought it was a snow but after a few minute when we went out It was thick hard hail.
So our original plan(riding a sledge)was broken out.
The hail became so hard so after a few minute it was even hard to go out so we just in side our room and played inside.
It was quite okay at first but as the time went by we came very boaring and we want to go out and play.
But because of the heavy hail we went to a ball room and people at there made some games to join us.
The first game was a quiz.
We made a team and solved a problem.
our team and the other two team went to the finall stage but all three team fell at that stage so nobody have won the game.
After that we play some korean traditional game.
It was quite hard but it was very enjoyable and every body liked it.
When it was nearly time for dinner the hail went weeker wo we could go out.
We went to a store and bouthgt some snacks.
The food at there was not very good so lot of people didin't eat very much.
If there was no store then we have to say for few ours without food.
The store was not so big so there was not much thing but it was quite warm and nice so many peoples were there.
After dinner we went to a ball room and played a little bit.
But many of them were tired so it was not very fun like before.
At 8o'clock we went to our room and stayed at there and played a little bit and went to bed.
The other room was very noisy because of the noise of playing but the people in our room was very tired so we've just went to bed.
On next day we've got up at 7 o'clock.
If there was no rain we should have went to mountain but It was rainning outside so we just stayed in ball room and played a dommino.
Our teams dommino was not as good as other teems but any way we finished it on time and it worked well.
After dommino it was snowing again so we've just stayed in inside untill lunch.
After lunch we came back home.
It was quite warm in ulsan and there was no rain.
I've made some frieds at there and get to know each other.
I hope I can have a chance to go to that sort of place again.

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I'd went to the camp few days ago.

=> I went to camp a few days ago.

The ulsan university took us to the camp.

=> Ulsan University took us to the camp.

It was in the moutain of gyeongju.

=> It was in the mountain of Gyeongju.

At 9 o'clock we've went to the ulsan university.

=> At 9 o'clock we went to Ulsan University.

There were about 70students.

=> There were about 70 students.

I've meet a friend who i've meet on computer class.

=> I met a friend who I met at computer class.

I'd said hello to him but he didn't recconized me so I'd just passed on.

=> I said hello to him, but he didn't recognize me so I just passed on.

About 12am we arrived at the camp.

=> At about 12am we arrived at the camp.

It was on the moutain.

Because it was rainy it was very foggy and freezing cold.

=> It was raining and also very foggy and freezing cold.

While eating a lunch the rain changed in to a hail.

=> While eating lunch the rain changed into hail.

Af first we thought it was a snow but after a few minute when we went out It was thick hard hail.

=> At first we thought it was snow, but after a few minutes we went out and it was thick hard hail.

So our original plan(riding a sledge)was broken out.

=> So our original plan to ride a sledge was broken.

The hail became so hard so after a few minute it was even hard to go out so we just in side our room and played inside.

=> The hail became so hard and after a few minutes it became even harder so we stayed inside our rooms and played inside.

It was quite okay at first but as the time went by we came very boaring and we want to go out and play.

=> It was quite o.k. at first, but as time went by we became very bored and we wanted to go outside and play.

But because of the heavy hail we went to a ball room and people at there made some games to join us.

=> But because of the heavy hail, we went to the ballroom and people there joined us to play some games.

The first game was a quiz.

We made a team and solved a problem.

our team and the other two team went to the finall stage but all three team fell at that stage so nobody have won the game.

=> Our team and the other two teams went to the final stage, but all three teams failed that stage so nobody won the game.


After that we play some korean traditional game.

=> After that we played some Korean traditional games.

It was quite hard but it was very enjoyable and every body liked it.

When it was nearly time for dinner the hail went weeker wo we could go out.

=> When it was nearly time for dinner, the hail got weaker so we could go out.

We went to a store and bouthgt some snacks.

The food at there was not very good so lot of people didin't eat very much.

=> The food there was not very good so a lot of people didn't eat very much.

If there was no store then we have to say for few ours without food.

=> If there was no store, we had to stay for a few hours without food.

The store was not so big so there was not much thing but it was quite warm and nice so many peoples were there.

=> The store was not so big and there was not much there. It was quite warm and nice so many people were there.

After dinner we went to a ball room and played a little bit.

But many of them were tired so it was not very fun like before.

At 8o'clock we went to our room and stayed at there and played a little bit and went to bed.

The other room was very noisy because of the noise of playing but the people in our room was very tired so we've just went to bed.

=> The other room was very noisy, but the people in our room were very tired so we just went to bed.

On next day we've got up at 7 o'clock.

=> The next day we got up at 7 o'clock.

If there was no rain we should have went to mountain but It was rainning outside so we just stayed in ball room and played a dommino.

=> If there was no rain we were going to go to the mountain, but it was raining outside so we just stayed in the ball room and played dominoes.

Our teams dommino was not as good as other teems but any way we finished it on time and it worked well.

=> Out teams domino was not as good as the other teams, but we finished on time anyway and it worked out well.

After dommino it was snowing again so we've just stayed in inside untill lunch.
After lunch we came back home.

=> After domino it was snowing again so we just stayed inside until lunch. After lunch we went back home.

It was quite warm in ulsan and there was no rain.

=> It was quite warm in Ulsan and there was no rain.

I've made some frieds at there and get to know each other.

=> I've made some friends there and we got to know each other well.

I hope I can have a chance to go to that sort of place again.

=> I hope I can have a chance to go the that sort of place again.